Blog Reviews

Asia's Blog- I really loved Asia's layout. It brought attention to her blogs and written stories. Her story "Anxiety" was a very good story. Her choice of words in the story fit perfect with the theme. I also liked how her poem was written in a story form.

808 boii blog- This was a very interesting page. Far different then what i have seen. Thats what makes this one unique. The colors on the layout bring out his personality, and the stories on his page were very good. I also liked the pictures that 808 boii used. But i think that he should make his layout more organized.

Jnel man- The Riff that Jnels man did, was very good. The rhythm that she used was great. Also the picture that she used was meaningful, but also had humor too it.

Prison Poetry

Blood and Bone

When She Left

I helt it like a lead child

against my chest

cold and heavy

with shoulders hunched

and eyes without windows

because you

you cant look at this

you're not allowed

to take part in this

and all that wanted to bleed

upward to the throat

bled somewhere else

trickling warmly downward

into the brutal

mortal

blood and bone

- Martin Williams